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You have been invited to speak at your old high school.

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Dear Mr. Gonzales, First of all I wanted to thank you for the invitation regarding the upcoming Founder's Day celebration, it is really an honor to be one of the key speakers for the students and teachers. Since in the e-email you sent asked me what topics would I feel comfortable presenting, here's a list of them, so you can discuss them with the director's council and let me know your decision. - Why is it important for us to listen to our emotions? - Setting boundaries, why is it difficult? - Dating 101, things you should take into consideration before dating someone. - Stress and Anxiety management techniques In addition, I would really appreciate it if you could let me know the number of people that would be attending the presentation, since I'm planning on having some handouts printed out to share with them. I'll be awaiting for your response so I can start preparing for the big day. Also, please let me know the available time I have for the activity, maybe I can include and activity or game, they really spice up the presentations. Once again, thank you for your consideration and time. Sincerely, Claudia Pizzati

Dear Mr. Gonzales,

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
 I wanted to thank you for the invitation regarding the upcoming Founder's Day celebration, it is really
 an honor to be one of the key speakers for the students and teachers.

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 Setting boundaries, why is it difficult?

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Stress
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let
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Once again, thank you for your consideration and time.

Sincerely
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