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Letter to a sales representative asking for suggestions on buying a new computer

Letter to a sales representative asking for suggestions on buying a new computer DN8Ep

Dear Sales Representative, Subject: Need Suggestion for buying Laptop, Tablet or Hybrid. I want to buy a computer device that can replace my old laptop computer, but I am not sure whether to go with another laptop or switch to a tablet or perhaps one of the new tablet/laptop hybrids. Being a Post Grad student, I use my device for wide range of activities like from researching and note-taking during classes to watching movies and interacting with friends on social media. I want a device that is light, easy to carry between classes and supports a good wireless connectivity with a good integrated webcam for video calling. It needs to have a good processing power for coding and video editing. The device must have an HDMI port to connect with other devices. Also, I am a student, so I have a limited budget of 50K. My classes are starting from upcoming fall session, and I want to buy the device before that. Since you are the perfect man to ask, could you recommend the right type of device for me that suits all my needs and is also under my budget.

Dear Sales Representative,

Subject: Need Suggestion for buying Laptop, Tablet or Hybrid.

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