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You use the local swimming pool often and during one of your visits you have encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager and say what the problem was and when it happened, what the swimming pool staff have done about it, suggest your own solution to the problem

You use the local swimming pool often and during one of your visits you have encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager and say what the problem was and when it happened, what the swimming pool staff have done about it, suggest your own solution to the problem lLaVJ
My name is Andy wellington. A client in your leisure pool. I am writing to express my extreme dissatisfaction as regards a problem l encountered in your piscina. Last friday dated 21st August 2021, myself and my family members were opportuned to visit your pool as part of our leisure travel activities. Our intention was to dive into the water and enjoy all water sports such as sea walking, snorkelling, ice skating and scuba diving. I am thinking that it is a mechanical fault which requires urgent attention immediately. In relation to the specific of the issue, the erratic ph level alkalinity water is increasing outrageously and has adverse negative effect on the water whi h results into cloudy pool water. As a solution, l will suggest that you invite a pool expert to examine the HVAC installation and most specifically to scrutinize the water purification level and probably provide sewage treatment immediately. I am hoping that you will accede to my requests and resolve it promptly. Yours faithfully, Andy wellington.
My name is Andy wellington. A client in your leisure
pool
. I am writing to express my extreme dissatisfaction as regards a problem l encountered in your
piscina
.

Last
friday
dated 21st August 2021, myself and my family members were
opportuned
to visit your
pool
as part of our leisure travel activities. Our intention was to dive into the
water
and enjoy all
water
sports such as sea walking,
snorkelling
, ice skating and scuba diving. I am thinking that it is a mechanical fault which requires urgent attention immediately.

In relation to the specific of the issue, the erratic
ph
level alkalinity
water
is increasing
outrageously
and has adverse
negative
effect on the
water
whi
h results into cloudy
pool
water.

As a solution, l will suggest that you invite a
pool
expert to examine the HVAC installation and most
specifically
to scrutinize the
water
purification level and
probably
provide sewage treatment immediately.

I am hoping that you will accede to my requests and resolve it
promptly
.

Yours
faithfully
, Andy wellington.
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IELTS letter You use the local swimming pool often and during one of your visits you have encountered a problem. Write a letter to the manager and say what the problem was and when it happened, what the swimming pool staff have done about it, suggest your own solution to the problem

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  American English
6 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
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