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Introduce yourself to the university in terms of work and education

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Dear Admission Committee Members: I am Dr. Abolfazl Akbarzadeh, the associated professor of Medical Nanotechnology and a faculty member of Tabriz University of Medical Sciences. I am honored to support Tina Sepasi. This student has participated in my Chemistry and Nanomaterials and nanostructures classes and passed the courses with the highest scores and honors. We have been working on a book named “Nano-Medicine Science and Technology of Nanostructures. ” Therefore, I guarantee that she is a brilliant and hardworking candidate for your university. In my classes, I always ask lots of questions to cultivate students' minds for thinking and creativity, and her discussions had made me realize her talent in research. We outlined a scope of classroom projects to be completed, and she met them in the time required. In practical classes, she was always volunteered to do the tests as she is a fast learner and showed good teamwork skills among groups. During the experiments, she had always found the best solutions for the problems. Moreover, I was especially taken by her independent work ethic. Finally, it should not be unmentioned that she is a lovely person to work with. I respect her decision to pursue her specific research interests at your university. I am confident that she will be a successful student for your program to develop and apply her extraordinary talents. If you have any questions, I will be pleased to answer them.
Dear Admission Committee Members:

I am Dr.
Abolfazl
Akbarzadeh
, the associated professor of Medical Nanotechnology and a faculty member of Tabriz University of Medical Sciences. I
am honored
to support Tina
Sepasi
. This student has participated in my Chemistry and Nanomaterials and
nanostructures
classes and passed the courses with the highest scores and honors. We have been working on a book named “
Nano-Medicine
Science and Technology of
Nanostructures
. ”
Therefore
, I guarantee that she is a brilliant and hardworking candidate for your university.

In my classes, I always ask lots of questions to cultivate students' minds for thinking and creativity, and her discussions had made me realize her talent in research. We outlined a scope of classroom projects to
be completed
, and she met them in the time required. In practical classes, she was always volunteered to do the
tests
as she is a
fast
learner and
showed
good
teamwork
skills
among groups. During the experiments, she had always found the best solutions for the problems.
Moreover
, I was
especially
taken by her independent work ethic.

Finally
, it should not
be unmentioned
that she is a lovely person to work with. I respect her decision to pursue her specific research interests at your university. I am confident that she will be a successful student for your program to develop and apply her extraordinary talents. If you have any questions, I will be
pleased
to answer them.

IELTS letter Introduce yourself to the university in terms of work and education

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