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LETTER TO POSTPOND THE MEETING

LETTER TO POSTPOND THE MEETING wBNrr

Hi Derek- I hope this email finds you well and safe. Our Monday agenda duration is 2. 15h, and we have sent invitations to all attendees on May 10. In this sense, in online meetings there are most of the time plenty of distractions that cause them to extend. Since it is an important and unexpected situation for you, I will try my best to solve the problem, so I see alternatives tomorrow due to the fact that I want to be sure that you attend your second meeting (Monday, at 8: 00) on time. Just as an option, please let me know if it is possible for you to start the meeting 15 minute earlier? Sincerely, Parisa Farokhian

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IELTS letter LETTER TO POSTPOND THE MEETING

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American English

1 paragraphs

113 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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