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Last year you went on a holiday with your family. A friend has contacted you about the holiday and asked whether you would recommend it.

Last year you went on a holiday with your family. A friend has contacted you about the holiday and asked whether you would recommend it. ljab9
Dear Samir, It’s good to hear from you my friend, and I am pleased to tell you about our holiday last year. We decided to travel to Wallakala because we had heard from friends that it was an interesting place to visit. It’s on the coast and only about a 2 hour drive north of Sydney so, as a family, we decided to take the car. Wallakala has a range of accommodation but we wanted this to be a special holiday and therefore booked a beachfront villa for a week. We’re so glad we did. Not only are the villas almost on the sand but the standard is first-class. Waking up to the sound of the waves and watching the sun rising was such a magnificent experience. Wallakala also has a national park nearby and there are many fascinating coastal and bushland walks. Samir, not only do I recommend this place to you, but I say that you must go there. Your family will absolutely love it and they will love you for taking them there. Kind regards, Bilu
Dear Samir,

It’s
good
to hear from you my friend, and I am
pleased
to
tell
you about our holiday last year.

We decided to travel to
Wallakala
because
we had heard from friends that it was an interesting place to visit. It’s on the coast and
only
about a
2 hour
drive north of Sydney
so
, as a family, we decided to take the car.

Wallakala
has a range of accommodation
but
we wanted this to be a special holiday and
therefore
booked a beachfront villa for a week. We’re
so
glad we did. Not
only
are the villas almost on the sand
but
the standard is
first
-
class
. Waking up to the sound of the waves and watching the sun rising was such a magnificent experience.
Wallakala
also
has a national park nearby and there are
many
fascinating coastal and bushland walks.

Samir, not
only
do I recommend this place to you,
but
I say that you
must
go there. Your family will
absolutely
love
it and
they will
love
you for taking them there.

Kind regards,

Bilu
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IELTS letter Last year you went on a holiday with your family. A friend has contacted you about the holiday and asked whether you would recommend it.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
178 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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