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Dear MyPop magazine editors

Dear MyPop magazine editors BJEDw
It has came to my, and other Justin Timberlake fans's attention that recently you have made an article about his family vacations. At firste, It was normal for me, since I am used to this kind of articles. But then, pictures of Justin and his children in a shop. Inmediately, I felt angered. How could you sell the artist'privacy for views on your article? Of course, Justin was mad too, since they were taken and published without consent. Every fanclub feels very ashamed of MyPop now. If I had to explain my views on this kinda media coverage, I would say It's one of the worst ways of such. It is a violation of one's privacy. And while you excuse yourselves that celebrities must be used to this situations, they themselves may feel incomodated by being secretly followed for pictures that will mostly end online. I hope the editor of MyPop issue an apology to Justin and his fans, and delete the article, too. It is time that magazines respect celebrities lives and start treating them like what they are, human. From now on, I won't be reading MyPop again. I will look foward to your reply. Sincerely. Agostina
It has
came
to my, and other Justin
Timberlake
fans's
attention that recently you have made an
article
about his family vacations. At
firste
, It was normal for me, since I am
used
to this kind of
articles
.
But
then, pictures of Justin and his children in a shop.

Inmediately
, I felt angered. How could you sell the artist'privacy for views on your
article
?
Of course
, Justin was mad too, since they
were taken
and published without consent. Every
fanclub
feels
very
ashamed of
MyPop
now
.

If I had to
explain
my views on this kinda media coverage, I would say It's one of the worst ways of such. It is a violation of one's privacy. And while you excuse yourselves that celebrities
must
be
used
to
this
situations, they themselves may feel
incomodated
by being
secretly
followed for pictures that will
mostly
end
online.

I hope the editor of
MyPop
issue an apology to Justin and his fans, and delete the
article
, too. It is time that magazines respect celebrities
lives
and
start
treating them like what they are, human. From
now
on, I won't be reading
MyPop
again.

I will look
foward
to your reply.

Sincerely
.

Agostina
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IELTS letter Dear MyPop magazine editors

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7 paragraphs
198 words
6.0
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