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Dear MyPop magazine editors

Dear MyPop magazine editors BJEDw
It has came to my, and other Justin Timberlake fans's attention that recently you have made an article about his family vacations. At firste, It was normal for me, since I am used to this kind of articles. But then, pictures of Justin and his children in a shop. Inmediately, I felt angered. How could you sell the artist'privacy for views on your article? Of course, Justin was mad too, since they were taken and published without consent. Every fanclub feels very ashamed of MyPop now. If I had to explain my views on this kinda media coverage, I would say It's one of the worst ways of such. It is a violation of one's privacy. And while you excuse yourselves that celebrities must be used to this situations, they themselves may feel incomodated by being secretly followed for pictures that will mostly end online. I hope the editor of MyPop issue an apology to Justin and his fans, and delete the article, too. It is time that magazines respect celebrities lives and start treating them like what they are, human. From now on, I won't be reading MyPop again. I will look foward to your reply. Sincerely. Agostina
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attention that recently you have made an
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about his family vacations. At
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I hope the editor of
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MyPop
issue an apology to Justin and his fans, and delete the
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article
, too. It is time that magazines respect celebrities
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treating them like what they are, human. From
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on, I won't be reading
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MyPop
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Sincerely
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Agostina
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IELTS letter Dear MyPop magazine editors

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  American English
7 paragraphs
198 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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