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You travelled on plane some days back and lost your bag. Though you filed your claim to 'Lost and Found Department', you have not received your bag yet. !n your letter o write the details of incident o inquire the status of your lost bag to airline o tell what you want if the bag is not found

You travelled on plane some days back and lost your bag. Though you filed your claim to 'Lost and Found Department', you have not received your bag yet. ! n your letter o write the details of incident o inquire the status of your lost bag to airline o tell what you want if the bag is not found Nq9N
Dear Officer, I am writing this letter to draw your attention about my lost baggage. I happened to lose it while I was traveling from Boston to Cincinnati on 24 July, 201. 4. My passenger N a me Record ( p N R) is 45g6235 g. I reached Northern Kentucky international Airport on time, and waited for my baggage to arrive at the baggage carousel. I waited for a while, and then realized that my bag did not arrive. Immediately, I sensed (that) either my bag was misplaced or lost. Hence, I reported this incident to 'Lost and Found Department at the airport. The officer took the bag details and filed a claim. My claim receipt number is XU23259. I was told that it would take a couple of days to investigate this matter and locate the bag. It has been over three days to this incident, and I have not heard anything from your end. My bag carried some valuable items and l apprehend having lost them by now r request you to expedite the process of locating the bat or compensate me appropriately against the claim. The bag description is mentioned below: Make of bag: Samsonite Color: Silver Size: Large Material: Tough, untearable I solicit your co-operation. Yours faithfully, Tim Horton
Dear Officer,

I am writing this letter to draw your attention about my lost baggage. I

happened to lose it while I was traveling from Boston to Cincinnati on 24

When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "July 201".
July, 201
. 4. My passenger N
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a me
Record
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(
p N R) is 45g6235 g.

I reached Northern Kentucky international Airport on time, and waited for

my baggage to arrive at the baggage carousel. I waited for a while, and then

realized that my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
did not arrive. Immediately, I sensed (that) either my

bag
was misplaced
or lost.
Hence
, I reported this incident to 'Lost and Found

Department at the airport. The officer took the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
and filed a claim.

My claim receipt number is XU23259. I was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
that it would take a couple

of days to investigate this matter and locate the bag.

It has been over three days to this incident, and I have not heard anything

from your
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end
. My
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bag
carried
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some
valuable items and l apprehend having

lost them by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
r request you to expedite the process of locating the bat

or compensate me
appropriately
against the claim. The
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bag
description
is mentioned
below:

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Make
of
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bag
: Samsonite

Color: Silver

Size: Large

Material: Tough,
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untearable


I solicit your co-operation.

Yours
faithfully
,

Tim Horton
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IELTS letter You travelled on plane some days back and lost your bag. Though you filed your claim to 'Lost and Found Department', you have not received your bag yet. ! n your letter o write the details of incident o inquire the status of your lost bag to airline o tell what you want if the bag is not found

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