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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take G7jj
Dear Mr Smith, I am currently enrolled in the advanced analytics course which is scheduled for weeknights 6 pm to 8 pm. Because I have been promoted to the position of Principal Consultant, I will not be able to attend my classes for next 2 months. Let me explain my situation. Apart from being a part time student, I am a full time employee at Accenture. Recently, I have been promoted to the position of Principal Consultant, which requires me to perform more duties and responsibilities. It is essential for me to visit USA for 2 months to coordinate with the client. As such, it will not be possible to continue with the course timings. I request you to transfer my enrollment to the winter session which is scheduled to commence on 2nd October 2021. This change will allow me to concentrate on my work duties and pick up my academic career where I left off. Thank you for your consideration. Yours Sincerely Anna
Dear Mr Smith,

I am
currently
enrolled in the advanced analytics course which
is scheduled
for weeknights 6 pm to 8 pm.
Because
I have
been promoted
to the position of Principal Consultant, I will not be able to attend my classes for
next
2 months.

Let
me
explain
my situation. Apart from being a
part time
student, I am a full time employee at Accenture. Recently, I have
been promoted
to the position of Principal Consultant, which requires me to perform more duties and responsibilities. It is essential for me to visit USA for 2 months to coordinate with the client. As such, it will not be possible to continue with the course timings.

I request you to transfer my enrollment to the winter session which
is scheduled
to commence on 2nd October 2021. This
change
will
allow
me to concentrate on my work duties and pick up my academic career where I
left
off.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
Sincerely


Anna
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IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
163 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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