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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions on how to send it back to you

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions on how to send it back to you eDYK
Dear Meghana, Hope you are doing good. Thanks for inviting me to your place and I'd like to let you know that I landed safely in India. I'm delighted by the love and affection that I received during my week's stay. I had a great time with your parents too, it reminded me our childhood days. I also enjoyed the culture very much there and would love to visit again if time permits. Unfortunately, in a rush to board the return flight, I forgot my purse at your home. It contains my debit and credit cards as well as my office ID, as they are very important, I want you to post them to me. You can mail it to H. no-1-1-815, Hitech City, Telangana, 500086, India. Don't forget to share the transit number, so that I can track the parcel and be available to collect it. I'd be waiting to receive my wallet. Best wishes, Nithin
Dear
Meghana
,

Hope you are doing
good
. Thanks for inviting me to your place and I'd like to
let
you know that I landed
safely
in India.

I'm delighted by the
love
and affection that I received during my week's stay. I had a great time with your parents too, it reminded me our childhood days.
I
also
enjoyed the culture
very
much there and would
love
to visit again if time permits.

Unfortunately, in a rush to board the return flight, I forgot my purse at your home. It contains my debit and credit cards
as well
as my office ID, as they are
very
important
, I want you to post them to me.

You can mail it to H. no-1-1-815,
Hitech
City, Telangana, 500086, India. Don't forget to share the transit number,
so
that I can
track
the parcel and be available to collect it.

I'd be waiting to receive my wallet.

Best wishes,

Nithin
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IELTS letter You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions on how to send it back to you

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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