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invited you have been invited by a colleague to his farewell party write a letter explaining your situation and your reasons for not attending

invited you have been invited by a colleague to his farewell party write a letter explaining your situation and your reasons for not attending G7Yj
Dear John, I am writing this letter to inform you that unfortunately I would be unable to attend your farewell party my reasons are expanded below. Firstly let me congratulate you on the successful completion of 5 years of your journey with our organisation. As your colleague and your friend I am really proud of you however I wish you all the best for your future endeavours. It is with a heavy heart that I tell you about the demise of my uncle as you know my great Uncle lived 5 states away and all of the family including me is at his residence. I hope you understand my predicament and forgive me. Although you are moving on to other greener pastures I will always cherish our memories together the one that is very close to my heart is the day we met at the canteen do you remember? How have the days passed quickly? On a parting note I wish you good fortune and a fruitful New Adventure. Hope to see you soon. Keep in touch. Best regards
Dear John, I am writing this letter to inform you that unfortunately I would be unable to attend your farewell party my reasons
are expanded
below.
Firstly
let
me congratulate you on the successful completion of 5 years of your journey with our
organisation
. As your colleague and your friend I am
really
proud of you
however
I wish you all the best for your future
endeavours
. It is with a heavy heart that I
tell
you about the demise of my uncle as you know my great Uncle
lived
5 states away and
all of the
family including me is at his residence. I hope you understand my predicament and forgive me. Although you are moving on to other greener pastures I will always cherish our memories together the one
that is
very
close to my heart is the day we met at the canteen do you remember? How have the days passed
quickly
? On a parting note I wish you
good
fortune and a fruitful New Adventure. Hope to
see
you
soon
.
Keep
in touch. Best
regards
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IELTS letter invited you have been invited by a colleague to his farewell party write a letter explaining your situation and your reasons for not attending

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  American English
1 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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