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Write a letter to a moving company let the know the damaged some of your furniture tell them you're not happy and suggest solution

Write a letter to a moving company let the know the damaged some of your furniture tell them you're not happy and suggest solution KJxR

Dear sir / madam I am writing this letter to inform you about the extremely pathetic service offered by your firm not only did your service inflict financial losses but mental agony as well. I contracted to move my belongings from Gujarat to Maharashtra little did I know I would be greeted with broken furniture and extremely rude staff! After trying to bring to their attention the destruction to my property caused by their actions your staff responded by a nonchalant wave. Later I insisted to talk to a supervisor wherein they dismissed me as a rude customer. Therefore it begs to ask the question is this your idea of customer satisfaction? . I would also like to bring to your attention all the legal implications it can cause. Also how future customers will associate your name with a negative experience. On a concluding note as a wronged customer I would expect nothing other than a full refund plus a sincere apology. Awaiting your response at the earliest. Yours sincerely

Dear sir / madam I am writing this letter to inform you about the extremely
 pathetic service offered by your firm not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 did your service inflict financial losses This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 mental agony as well
. I contracted to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 my belongings from Gujarat to Maharashtra This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 did I know I would be greeted
 with broken furniture and extremely
 rude staff! “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 trying to bring to their attention the destruction to my property caused by their actions your staff responded by a nonchalant wave. Later I The usual collocation for "insisted" is "on" not "to". Did you mean "insisted on talking"?insisted on talking
insisted to talk
 to a supervisor wherein they dismissed me as a rude You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customer
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
 it begs to Consider using "ask" instead.ask
ask the question
 is this your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customer
 satisfaction? Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
 I would also
 like to bring to your attention all the legal implications it can cause. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 how future You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customers
 will associate your name with a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 experience. On a concluding note as a wronged You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customer
 I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 nothing other than a full refund plus a sincere apology. Awaiting your response at the earliest. Yours Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphsincerely.sincerely!sincerely?sincerely:sincerely,sincerely;
sincerely