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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.

You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam, llK1
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to provide my feedback about quality of food and service at your restaurant. I often visit your restaurant for the popular and delicious Indian cuisine "Butter Chicken" and Panner. Recently, on the special day of mother's birthday, we visited your restaurant to enjoy our favourite dishes. I made prior reservation well in advance for a splendid evening with my mother. Unfortunately, we were not assigned any table by your staff on the time. Moreover, the restaurant incharge was rude to me when I asked him about my reservation. After awiating 30 mintues, we were provided with the table, which was not cleaned in proper manner. To make this our evening far more worse, the waiter did not brought the items that we ordered. Both of us were highly disappointed with careless food service and rude behaviour of your staff. Therefore, you should take necessary steps to train your staff and make them behave friendly with customers. I hope you will consider my complaint and do the needful. Yours faithfully, Indrakiran Reddy
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to provide my feedback about quality of food and service at your
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restaurant
. I
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often
visit your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
for the popular and delicious Indian cuisine
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"
Butter Chicken
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"
and
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Panner
.

Recently, on the special day of mother's birthday, we visited your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
to enjoy our
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favourite
dishes. I made prior reservation well in advance for a splendid evening with my mother. Unfortunately, we were not assigned any table by your staff on the time.
Moreover
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
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incharge
was rude to me when I asked him about my reservation. After
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awiating
30
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mintues
, we
were provided
with the table, which was not cleaned in proper manner. To
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make
this our evening far
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more worse
, the waiter did not
The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: "bring"
brought
the items that we ordered. Both of us were
highly
disappointed with careless food service and rude
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behaviour
of your staff.
Therefore
, you should take necessary steps to train your staff and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
them behave friendly with customers.

I hope you will consider my complaint and do the needful.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Indrakiran
Reddy

IELTS letter You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam,

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177 words
6.0
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