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Dear John I’m going to write a letter to you about spending holiday in Kermanshah, and I will tell you a normous necessity and useful data that can help you to will have perfect trip. There are many hotel and sideway inn that you can book, and it’s depend on your money but the best one is Kouresh Hotel that is situated in the serene montain lake near the city. That is a economic place to accommodate for two weeks. I have several and perfect admonish for you, consequently it caused you will have a great trip. Firstly If you don’t want to face some challenges, it would better to reserve a proper venue in advanced. Secondly, please do not use cash in your pocket and only use debit card. Thankfully, In The Summer the weather is not too hot, and is moderate, therefore, you can use some casual clothes and don’t bring extra ones. I hope you have a memorable trip in our city. With the best, Amin
Dear John

I’m going to write a letter to you about spending holiday in
Kermanshah
, and I will
tell
you a
normous
necessity and useful data that can
help
you to will have perfect trip.

There are
many hotel
and
sideway
inn
that you can book, and it’s depend on your money
but
the best one is
Kouresh
Hotel that
is situated
in the serene
montain
lake near the city.
That is
a
economic place to accommodate for two weeks.

I have several and perfect admonish for you,
consequently
it caused you will have a great trip.
Firstly
If you don’t want to face
some
challenges, it would
better
to reserve a proper venue in advanced.
Secondly
,
please
do not
use
cash in your pocket and
only
use
debit card.

Thankfully
, In The Summer the weather is not too hot, and is moderate,
therefore
, you can
use
some
casual clothes and don’t bring extra ones.

I hope you have a memorable trip in our city.

With the best,

Amin
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IELTS letter I’m going to write a letter to you about

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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