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Recently you saw an article in a newspaper about a city you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect, write a letter to the editor. How you know about this city. What information was incorrect What the editor should do about this.

Recently you saw an article in a newspaper about a city you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect, write a letter to the editor. How you know about this city. What information was incorrect What the editor should do about this. LXW8
Dear Sir / Mam I am writing this letter to give feedback about the article which published in Chandigarh city insight in the Times of Indian newspaper on 12/03/2021. As a resident of the city, I would like to express my gratitude for appraising the city by writing about it in your magazine. The information of city like beauty of India, Temples and other tourist attraction was well define. Overall article was excellent and super structured but unfortunately there was a small glitch observed, instead of mentioning that our city has majority of white collar employee, but here you have printed as blue collar I may be over thinking bit it might be impact on the future investment in the field of education and retail. This is because institute or malls will not find enough staff and clients for their operation. I am requesting to you, should solve this issue, please highlight the same news in your next week edition with exactly correction. Yours faithfully Priyanka
Dear Sir / Mam

I am writing this letter to give feedback about the article which published in Chandigarh city insight in the Times of Indian newspaper on
The given date is in the future, but the verb is in past tense.
12/03/2021
.

As a resident of the city, I would like to express my gratitude for appraising the city by writing about it in your magazine. The information of city like beauty of India, Temples and other tourist attraction was well
Consider using a past participle here: "defined".
define
.
Overall
article was excellent and super structured
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
unfortunately there was a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
glitch observed,
instead
of mentioning that our city has
It seems that an article is missing.
majority of
white collar employee,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
here you have printed as blue collar I may be over thinking bit it might be impact on the future investment in the field of education and retail. This is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
institute or malls will not find
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
staff and clients for their operation.

I am requesting to you, should solve this issue,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
highlight the same news in your
next
week edition with exactly correction.

Yours
faithfully


Priyanka

IELTS letter Recently you saw an article in a newspaper about a city you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect, write a letter to the editor. How you know about this city. What information was incorrect What the editor should do about this.

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165 words
6.0
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