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You made a friend when you visited another city a few months ago. This friend has come to your city for some work and will stay for another week. You want to invite this friend to your home for dinner. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, express how you feel about him/her visiting your city invite the friend to your home for dinner give location and date when you would want him/her to come

You made a friend when you visited another city a few months ago. This friend has come to your city for some work and will stay for another week. You want to invite this friend to your home for dinner. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, express how you feel about him/her visiting your city invite the friend to your home for dinner give location and date when you would want him/her to come bGAQ
Dear Cane, I am so glad to know that you are currently visiting my city for some work. I also hope that you are managing to do your job without any troubles. I am so looking forward to meeting you. I had always wanted to invite you to visit me and my city after meeting you about 6 months ago, but because of my busy work schedule, I couldn’t do so yet. But, now that you are already in my city, I don’t really want to let pass this opportunity to invite you. In fact, I want to invite you to my home in order to enjoy some dinner with me next Saturday which would be 20th of September. As for my location, I live only about 15-minute drive away from your hotel. All you need to do is to head towards the west on Highway 9 and drive about 10 minutes to reach Edmond. After reaching Edmond, drive about 5 minutes on Fuller road towards the north until you reach the midway mall. My home is right behind the mall. But, don’t hesitate to call me if you have any trouble in finding my location. Hope to see you soon then! Warm wishes, Peter Donne
Dear Cane,

I am
so
glad to know that you are
currently
visiting my city for
some
work. I
also
hope that you are managing to do your job without any troubles.
I
am
so
looking forward to meeting you.

I
had always wanted to invite you to visit me and my city after meeting you about 6 months ago,
but
because
of my busy work schedule, I couldn’t do
so
yet
.
But
,
now
that you are already in my city, I don’t
really
want to
let
pass this opportunity to invite you. In fact, I want to invite you to my home in order to enjoy
some
dinner with me
next
Saturday which would be 20th of September.

As for my location, I
live
only
about 15-minute drive away from your hotel. All you need to do is to head towards the west on Highway 9 and drive about 10 minutes to reach Edmond. After reaching Edmond, drive about 5 minutes on Fuller road towards the north until you reach the midway mall. My home is right behind the mall.
But
, don’t hesitate to call me if you have any trouble in finding my location.

Hope to
see
you
soon
then!

Warm wishes,

Peter Donne
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IELTS letter You made a friend when you visited another city a few months ago. This friend has come to your city for some work and will stay for another week. You want to invite this friend to your home for dinner. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, express how you feel about him/her visiting your city invite the friend to your home for dinner give location and date when you would want him/her to come

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  American English
7 paragraphs
205 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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