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You made a friend when you visited another city a few months ago. This friend has come to your city for some work and will stay for another week. You want to invite this friend to your home for dinner. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, express how you feel about him/her visiting your city invite the friend to your home for dinner give location and date when you would want him/her to come

You made a friend when you visited another city a few months ago. This friend has come to your city for some work and will stay for another week. You want to invite this friend to your home for dinner. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, express how you feel about him/her visiting your city invite the friend to your home for dinner give location and date when you would want him/her to come YjPn

Dear Smith, I hope you are doing well. I had received your letter yesterday that you came to my city due to some work and you will be here until next week. I really appreciate your support and help which you did for me while my visiting to your city. I was not only surprised to knew that you are in my hometown but also feel excited to meet you again. Moreover, I am angry with you because why you did not inform me about your trip? I can arrangement your stay at my home instead of staying in the hotel. However, I glad to know your presence here. As you mentioned in the letter that you came here for office meeting which is postponed to Monday. Hence, you have some leisure time so why don't you join a dinner with me and my family? I still remember our last meeting and you had promised me that you will visit my home soon. My home is located near that city centre, where you can reach by public transportation within 45 minutes from your hotel. If you do not have any busy schedule we can meet Saturday evening and will enjoy dinner together one more time. You may left from here Sunday evening to attend the meeting on Monday. Thus we can spend enough quality time with each other while recalling our previous meetings. I look forwarded to meeting you soon. Warm wishes, 'David.

Dear Smith,

I hope you are doing well. I had received your letter yesterday that you came to my city due to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 work and you will be here until next
 week.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
really
 appreciate your support and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 which you did for me while my visiting to your city. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 was not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 surprised to knew that you are in my hometown This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 feel excited to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you again. Moreover
, I am angry with you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 why you did not inform me about your trip? I The word 'arrangement' is a noun or an adjective. A verb or adverb is missing or misspelled here, or maybe a comma is missing.
can arrangement
 your stay at my home instead
 of staying in the hotel. However
, Did you mean "I am"?I am
I
 glad to know your presence here. As you mentioned in the letter that you came here for office You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshowdowncontestconventioncompetitionsessiontalk
meeting
 which is postponed
 to Monday. Hence
, you have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 leisure time This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 why don't you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 a dinner with me and my family? I still
 remember our last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshowdowncontestconventioncompetitionsessiontalk
meeting
 and you had promised me that you will visit my home This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

My home is located
 near that city Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
, where you can reach by public transportation within 45 minutes from your hotel. If you do not have any busy schedule we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 Saturday evening and will enjoy dinner together one more time. You may The verb 'may' requires the base form of the verb: "leave"leave
left
 from here Sunday evening to attend the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshowdowncontestconventioncompetitionsessiontalk
meeting
 on Monday. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Thus,
Thus
 we can spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 quality time with each other while recalling our previous meetings.

I look forwarded to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshowdowncontestconventioncompetitionsessiontalk
meeting
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Warm wishes, 'David. 