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. Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. · thank them for the photos and for the holiday · explain why you didn’t write earlier · invite them to come and stay with you

. Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. · thank them for the photos and for the holiday · explain why you didn’t write earlier · invite them to come and stay with you P6Ej

Dear Monica and Amlan, I hope you both are in your good health. I am writing this letter to thank you for sharing the photos. We all are looking so amazing. I would like to thank you both from the bottom of my heart for making the holiday trip so memorable. I never thought we would capture so many memories and today after looking at these photos reminded me of our trip again. I would have never ever had such holiday without you guys. I am sorry for writing the letter this late. I was so occupied after returning from the holiday. I had my apartment work which had to be get done as soon as possible. I had to prepare for my driving test. I had lot of pending working in the office which had to be completed. All came together and I got occupied for couple of weeks. I have purchased a new apartment after returning from the holiday and shifted recently. Why don't you guys come over for a couple of weeks. We will relive our holiday stay again. I can't forget those days. Hopping to see you guys soon. Yours Lovingly, XYZ.

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holiday
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 weeks.

I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 a new apartment after returning from the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfestivityrecessfestivalfeastanniversaryvacation
holiday
 and shifted recently. Why don't you guys This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 over for a couple of weeks. We will relive our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfestivityrecessfestivalfeastanniversaryvacation
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see
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soon
.

Yours Lovingly
,

XYZ. 