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You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take GEd2
Dear sir or madam, I hope this letter meets you well, I was walking by today with my cousin when she sighted your restaurant and told me how delicious the food is with extra spice. She knows I love spice so much so I told her let’s go in and place order. We entered the restaurant, it is actually a beautiful place and very welcoming but I had a problem with the chef who served us. she was very rude, I asked for the menu and she actually shouted saying it’s just right in front of me. we walked out because it was embarrassing. Your restaurant is very popular and am sure you won’t want to loose customers so it’s better you have a staff meeting and training them on how to respond properly to customers and also let them be involved in building customer relationship. I hope I get a response soon. Regards, Nancy
Dear sir or madam, I hope this letter meets you well, I was walking by
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told
me how delicious the food is with extra spice. She knows I
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love
spice
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much
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I
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’s go in and place order.

We entered the restaurant, it is actually a
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beautiful
place and
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welcoming
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I had a problem with the chef who served us. she was
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rude, I
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asked for
the
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menu and
she actually shouted saying it’s
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right in front of me. we walked
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out
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it was embarrassing.

Your restaurant is
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popular and am sure you won’t want to
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loose
customers
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so
it’s better you have a staff meeting and training them on how to respond
properly
to customers and
also
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them
be involved
in building customer relationship. I hope I
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get
a response
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. Regards, Nancy
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IELTS letter You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
154 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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