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A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food

A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food pk50
Dear Frank, I hope you are doing well, How are you and your family? I hope they are Great. I am so excited to visit you in France. I am super excited to meet your family so I was wondering what is the best gift to get for them when coming along for example chocolates or wine. you are the best person to tell me what they really love as a gift. It will be really helpful if you can tell me outfits to bring because of the weather condition and also the ones that will match the activities that we will be attending together. For example Halloween. I really don’t want to bring too much and have extra luggage at the airport. Most importantly the food is what I have interest in, I’ll like you to share what kinds of food are available. I may be familiar with some. Give my regards to your family’s i hope to see you soon. Regards, mercy.
Dear Frank, I hope you are doing well, How are you and your family? I hope they are Great. I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
excited to visit you in France.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am super excited to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
your family
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I was wondering what is the best gift to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
for them when coming along
for example
chocolates or wine.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
you
are the best person to
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tell
me what they
really
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love
as a gift.

It will be
really
helpful if you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
me outfits to bring
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the weather condition and
also
the ones that will match the activities that we will be attending together.
For example
Halloween. I
really
don’t want to bring too much and have extra luggage at the airport.

Most
importantly
the food is what I have interest in, I’ll like you to share what kinds of food are available. I may be familiar with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
. Give my regards to your family’s
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
. Regards, mercy.
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IELTS letter A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
164 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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