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After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family. lEW9
Dear sir or madam, I hope you are doing well, How are you and the family? I hope they are Good as well. After the accident in which you helped me, I am just recovering and will like to properly introduce myself. my name is Jonathan Brooks, I am a banker, I am married and have two kids. I am writing you so we can meet in person whenever you are free. It will be a privilege to meet the one who saved my life. I really do appreciate your kindness for taking care of me despite the fact you don’t know me, I was just a stranger yet I was saved. You are very kind-hearted and I love that I feel so much happiness within me for example getting someone to help a stranger is rare.  In order to show my gratitude I am inviting you and your family to my beautiful home, you are always welcomed anytime and I will also like to meet and thank you in person. I hope to see you soon. Yours sincerely, Nancy.
Dear sir or madam, I hope you are doing well, How are you and the family? I hope they are
Good
as well
. After the accident in which you
helped
me, I am
just
recovering and will like to
properly
introduce myself.
my
name is Jonathan Brooks, I am a banker, I
am married
and have two kids. I am writing you
so
we can
meet
in person whenever you are free. It will be a privilege to
meet
the one who saved my life.

I
really
do appreciate your kindness for taking care of me despite the fact you don’t know me, I was
just
a stranger
yet
I
was saved
. You are
very
kind-hearted and I
love
that I feel
so
much happiness within me
for example
getting someone to
help
a stranger is rare.  In order to
show
my gratitude I am inviting you and your family to my
beautiful
home, you are always welcomed anytime and I will
also
like to
meet
and thank you in person. I hope to
see
you
soon
. Yours
sincerely
, Nancy.
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IELTS letter After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing Express your appreciation And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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