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Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter: describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted

Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter: describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted A5BN
Dear sir, I hope this letter finds you well, I am writing you so I can give a presentation on what I gained in the conference. I will like to give more insight on customer relationship in the retail sector for example Victoria secret which sells women wears such as underwear, body mists and pygamas. This will be an interesting one, I will be sharing ideas on how to offer alternatives to customers and also Garment care. It will cover our daily activities in the store as well improve our skills. According to the plan i have for the presentation it will take only two hours to share and get feedback from all staffs. All staffs, training supervisors and also the cleaners should be in the meeting as it will be helpful to us all. using our staff pantry will be the best location for us to use because it is big enough to accommodate the people. I hope to get a positive feedback concerning the presentation. Yours sincerely, Nancy
Dear sir, I hope this letter finds you well, I am writing you
so
I can give a presentation on what I gained in the conference. I
will
like to give more insight on customer relationship in the retail sector
for example
Victoria secret which sells women wears such as underwear, body mists and
pygamas
.

This will be an interesting one, I will be sharing
ideas
on how to offer alternatives to customers and
also
Garment care. It will cover our daily activities in the store
as well
improve
our
skills
. According to the plan
i
have for the presentation it will take
only
two hours to share and
get
feedback from all staffs.

All staffs, training supervisors and
also
the cleaners should be in the meeting as it will be helpful to us all.
using
our staff pantry will be the best location for us to
use
because
it is
big
enough
to accommodate the
people
. I hope to
get
a
positive
feedback concerning the presentation. Yours
sincerely
,
Nancy
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your manager asking for permission to give a presentation. In your letter: describe what type of presentation you have in mind what topics it would cover and how long it would take who should participate in the presentation and where should it be conducted

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
169 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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