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Request letter for sports club

Request letter for sports club GEM2

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Evelin Volosenkova, and I have just moved to the town and I am interested in Your sports club. Recently, I found out that the local university in which I just started studying has no sports facilities of its own. As an active and sporty person, for me it is important to be in shape and participate in sports. Also, I am an educated personal fitness trainer and have some questions to ask. Firstly, how much does membership in Your club cost? What is included in the price and do You have special offers for members? Secondly, do You provide members with their own locker, keys, towels and ect? Do You have yoga classes and how can I join them? Last, but not least, how do you deal with the Coronavirus situation? Thanks in advance, look forward to hearing from you soon. Hope to join your team soon! Sincerely, Evelin

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Sincerely
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