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you took your family a nearby restaurant to celebrate your birthday. you disappointed with the meal and the service of it. You wish to complain to the manager.

you took your family a nearby restaurant to celebrate your birthday. you disappointed with the meal and the service of it. You wish to complain to the manager. kLAXe
Dear Sir, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the poor service and unsatisfactory meal which presented to me at your restaurant from 5. 00 pm to 7. 00 pm in the 23rd of November. That day was my birthday and I went to your restaurant with my folks to celebrate my birthday. We arrived here at 5. 00 pm and entered yuor restaurant. Then I called one of your waiters and the waiter came. Firstly, I did not treat well and neglected is. Morover, he confuse orders and did not apologise to us. Secondly, the viands are prepared at your restaurant is not good too. Wishes which gave out to us were chilled, not delicious and image of it terrible too. Naturally, I disappointed from your restaurant and was forced to have to eat out in another restaurant. I believe that you will take my complaint seriously and make every afford to improve your service and meal in the future. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Your faithfully,
Dear Sir, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the poor service and unsatisfactory meal which presented to me at your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
from 5. 00 pm to 7. 00 pm in the 23rd of November. That day was my birthday and I went to your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
with my folks to celebrate my birthday. We arrived here at 5. 00 pm and entered
Possible spelling mistake found.
yuor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
. Then I called one of your waiters and the waiter came.
Firstly
, I did not treat well and neglected is.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Morover
, he
The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "confuses", "confused".
confuse
orders and did not
Possible spelling mistake. 'apologise' is British English.
apologise
to us.
Secondly
, the viands
are prepared
at your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
is not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
too. Wishes which gave out to us
were chilled
, not delicious and image of it terrible too.
Naturally
, I
The usual collocation for "disappointed" is "with" or "in" or "by" or "at" or "about" not "from". Did you mean "disappointed with" or "disappointed in" or "disappointed by" or "disappointed at" or "disappointed about"?
disappointed from
your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
and
was forced
to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
eat out in another
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
. I believe that you will take my complaint
seriously
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
every afford to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
your service and meal in the future. I look forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.
Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
faithfully
,

IELTS letter you took your family a nearby restaurant to celebrate your birthday. you disappointed with the meal and the service of it. You wish to complain to the manager.

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  American English
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172 words
5.0
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