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You bought a product from the shop, but you found it didn' work properly. Write a letter to the shop manager.

You bought a product from the shop, but you found it didn' work properly. Write a letter to the shop manager. G3kDB
Dear Sir, I recently purchased a microwave oven from your store located near to my home. I have enclosed of my receipt for your reference. Unfortunately, the item didn't function at all. I read through all the details within the accompanying instuction manual as well as worked through the various trouble shooting methods but it seems that the oven is simply is a faulty product. I have been a loyal customer of your store for more than five years, snd have always been perfectly satisified and happy with my purchase. This is the first time that something like this has happened with one of your products. I hope that you may be able to srnd me a replacement product or direct me to a store where I may return faulty item for a new one within the next to days. I expect that your this attention will keep our further relationship. Thank you in advance. Yours faithfully.
Dear Sir,

I recently
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purchased
a microwave oven from your store located near to my home. I have enclosed of my receipt for your reference.

Unfortunately, the item didn't function at all. I read through all the
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details
within the accompanying
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instuction
manual
as well
as worked through the various trouble shooting methods
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but
it seems that the oven is
simply
is a faulty product.

I have been a loyal customer of your store for more than five years,
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snd
have always been
perfectly
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satisified
and happy with my
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purchase
. This is the
first
time that something like this has happened
The verb 'happen' usually requires the preposition "to".
with
one of your products.

I hope that you may be able to
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srnd
me a replacement product or direct me to a store where I may return faulty item for a new one within the
next
to days. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
that your this attention will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
our
further
relationship.

Thank you in advance.

Yours
faithfully
.
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IELTS letter You bought a product from the shop, but you found it didn' work properly. Write a letter to the shop manager.

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