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Write an email to your foreign friend. Tell him/her about the city that you are living.

Write an email to your foreign friend. Tell him/her about the city that you are living. KY3Mk

Hi there Mr. Handsome, How are you doing? Sorry that I haven’t been in touch for a while. It’s been 2 years since we last met, I have moved to Thu Dau Mot City where it is located in Binh Duong Province. Thu Dau Mot is a bustling city with crowded residents, which is attracted lots of travelers around the world. It’s a fascinated place for foreigners to discover some engaging destinations. These includes Phu Loi Prison where you can find out the history of this place, New City Park where you can take a deep breath, Most typically that is Dai Nam tourist area where you can discover many kinds of entertainment. However, there are some drawbacks about Thu Dau Mot City is that there’s always traffic congestion because of the jammed resident system. Since then, dust from vehicles are released into the environment every day so it’s quite polluted. Overall, I really love my city because it’s the place where I was born. Well, what about you? I’m looking forward to hearing you soon. Anh

Hi there Mr. Handsome,

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moved
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Dau
 Mot City where it is located
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Duong
 Province.

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some
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These includes
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 Prison where you can find out the history of this place, New City Park where you can take a deep breath, Most typically
that is
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Dai
 Nam tourist area where you can discover This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 kinds of entertainment.

However
, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 drawbacks about Thu Possible spelling mistake found.DAUDayDanDadDamDA
Dau
 Mot City is that there’s always Consider using a past participle here: "trafficked".trafficked
traffic
 congestion This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the jammed resident system. Since then, dust from vehicles are released
 into the environment every day This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it’s quite polluted. Overall
, I really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 my city This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it’s the place where I was born
.

Well, what about you? I’m looking forward to hearing you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

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