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You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home, you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter, explain what happened to your watch, describe your watch, ask the manager to help find you.

You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home, you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter, explain what happened to your watch, describe your watch, ask the manager to help find you. jypp
Dear Sir, I am writing this to bring to your attention that I had lost my watch during a stay at your hotel last week while having a pool party on the east side pool. I had a business seminar last week, organized at your hotel. I stayed for three days. After the seminar was over, I went to enjoy a pool party with my colleagues. I remember keeping the watch aside before going into the water. It is a Rolex watch, steel-made. The dial has a silver shade with a hint of black. The strip is made up of little rectangular pieces joined by a chain. It has a display that shows the date and the pulse rate of an individual. Moreover, one can see the time for three different time-zones in it. The hour-hand is red in colour. It also has the words 'Rose' engraved on its backside. However, I forget to pick it up before leaving the poolside. I would really appreciate it if you and your staff help me in finding the watch. Also, if you can check with the Lost and Found department of your hotel if anyone had deposited it there. Sincerely, Maria Rose
Dear Sir, I am writing this to bring to your attention that I had lost my
watch
during a stay at your hotel last week while having a pool party on the east side pool. I had a business seminar last week, organized at your hotel. I stayed for three days. After the seminar was over, I went to enjoy a pool party with my colleagues. I remember keeping the
watch
aside
before
going into the water. It is a Rolex
watch
, steel-made. The dial has a silver shade with a hint of black. The strip
is made
up of
little
rectangular pieces
joined
by a chain. It has a display that
shows
the date and the pulse rate of an individual.
Moreover
, one can
see
the time for three
different
time-zones in it. The hour-hand is
red in colour
. It
also
has the words 'Rose' engraved on its backside.
However
, I forget to pick it up
before
leaving the poolside. I would
really
appreciate it if you and your staff
help
me in finding the
watch
.
Also
, if you can
check
with the Lost and Found department of your hotel if anyone had deposited it there.
Sincerely
, Maria Rose
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IELTS letter You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home, you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter, explain what happened to your watch, describe your watch, ask the manager to help find you.

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  American English
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