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You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: • Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. • State what your skills and experience are. • Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.

You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: • Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. • State what your skills and experience are. • Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long. DKE6
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to enquire about the next trip to Kenya as I am planning to join this trip and wants to do some voluntary work there. Currently, I am pursuing my Masters’ degree in the political science from the University of Alberta. During this course, firstly I came to know about importance of unpaid work as it is compulsory for me to complete the one of the active learning assignments in the upcoming semester. First of all, I think that I have acquired significant skills to teach English language at beginner and advanced level. To prove this, during my graduate studies, I taught English to the primary school for one year. Additionally, I just cleared the ESOL examination from the Oxford University. As I examine your brochure with full concentration, I conclude that I will join the trip to Kenya in the next summar vacation. I am pleased to inform you that I am available with this trip throughout it stay. I am anticipating your favourable and swift response in this regard. Yours faithfully, Endrick Contractor.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to
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enquire
about the
next
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trip
to Kenya as I am planning to
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join
this
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trip
and wants to do
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some
voluntary work there.

Currently
, I am pursuing my Masters’ degree in the political science from the University of Alberta. During this course,
firstly
I came to know about importance of unpaid work as it is compulsory for me to complete the one of the active learning assignments in the upcoming semester.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that I have acquired significant
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
to teach English language at beginner and advanced level. To prove this, during my graduate studies, I taught English to the primary school for one year.
Additionally
, I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
cleared the
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ESOL
examination from the Oxford University.

As I examine your brochure with full concentration, I conclude that I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trip
to Kenya in the
next
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summar
vacation. I am
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
to inform you that I am available with this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trip
throughout it stay.

I am anticipating your
Possible spelling mistake. 'favourable' is British English.
favourable
and swift response in this regard.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Endrick
Contractor.
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IELTS letter You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: • Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. • State what your skills and experience are. • Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.

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8 paragraphs
181 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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