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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.

A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer. wy1N

Thank you for your letter. I was thrilled to hear that you’re thinking about going on a camping holiday this summer. As you know, I am eternal supporter of camping. According to me this camping will refresh your mind as you’ve been working seven days a week. Some peaceful time around nature will ease off your mind from work load. You’ll also get chance to make new friends from fellow campers. As an experienced camper, I would like to tell you about some problems that you might face during your trip. First is weather conditions. As you’re planning to go in summer the temperature is too hot. Moreover, you’ll also feel lonely. Its better if you stay with camping group because single campers feel discomfort during night because of noises. And there will be some insects and bed bugs as well. I would love to go out with you on camping. But as you know I’ve recently joined my new job and we’ve received a big project for our company. So there’s a big load of work this summer. So, I’ve to miss this chance to go with you on your first camping trip. I look forward to hear from you about this trip. Best wishes, Mary

Thank you for your letter. I was thrilled
 to hear that you’re thinking about going on a camping holiday this summer. As you know, I Please check whether an article is missing: "am a eternal" or "am an eternal"am a eternalam an eternal
am eternal
 supporter of camping. This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using "in my opinion" or "I think".In my opinionI think
According to me
 this camping will refresh your mind as you’ve been working seven days a week. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 peaceful time around nature will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
ease
 off your mind from work load. You’ll also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 chance to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 new friends from fellow campers. As an experienced camper, I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you about This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 problems that you might face during your trip. First
 is weather conditions. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 you’re planning to go in summer the temperature is too hot. Moreover
, you’ll also
 feel lonely. Its better if you stay with camping group This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 single campers feel discomfort during night This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of noises. And there will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 insects and bed bugs as well
. I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to go out with you on camping. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 as you know I’ve recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatedfused
joined
 my new Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).job, and
job and
 we’ve received a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 project for our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 there’s a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 load of work this summer. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I’ve to miss this chance to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accompany
go with
 you on your first
 camping trip. I look forward In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".to hearing
to hear
 from you about this trip.

Best wishes, Mary