Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

You are going on a short training course at a college in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college

You are going on a short training course at a college in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college MNxe

Dear. Greenmount college officer I’m ____, From South Korea. I’m going to have short training course From 3th Mar in your college. I’m writing to this letter for asking accommodation. It’s first time to stay at there, I’m really looking forward to have class in your college. I would like to ask you, could I get information of somewhere to stay in. And I would appreciated, If I get information of it. I will give you more detail about me. I’m going to stay for 3weeks. It is will be from 3th Mar until 31th Mar. The best of accommodation for me is that staying alone near by collage. However, I don’t mind to stay with other students. I don’t want to stay in family house. The maximum of budget is 400pound per a week. As you can see, It’s kind of short time. Therefore It’s might difficult to find. Please let me know, if you find somewhere fit my situation.

Dear. Possible spelling mistake found.Green mount
Greenmount
 college Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphofficer.officer!officer?officer:officer,officer;
officer


I’m ____, From South Korea. I’m going to have short training course From Please check the suffix, if this is an ordinal number.1st2nd3rd
3th
 Mar in your college. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
’m writing to this letter for asking accommodation.

It’s first
 time to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withholidayvacationstopoversojourn
stay
 at there, I’m really
 looking forward In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to having".to having
to have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 in your college. I would like to ask you, could I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 information of somewhere to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withholidayvacationstopoversojourn
stay
 in.

And I would The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: "appreciate"appreciate
appreciated
, If I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 information of it.

I will give you more detail about me. I’m going to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withholidayvacationstopoversojourn
stay
 for 3weeks.

It is will be from Please check the suffix, if this is an ordinal number.1st2nd3rd
3th
 Mar until Please check the suffix, if this is an ordinal number.31st32nd33rd
31th
 Mar. The best of accommodation for me is that staying alone Did you mean "nearby"?nearby
near by
 collage. However
, I don’t mind to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withholidayvacationstopoversojourn
stay
 with other students.

I don’t want to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withholidayvacationstopoversojourn
stay
 in family This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. The maximum of budget is Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.400pound (0.18 t)400pound (0.18 ton)400pound (ca. 181 kg)400pound (181.44 kg)400pound (ca. 181 kilogram)400pound (181.44 kilogram)
400pound
 per a week.

As you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
, It’s kind of short time. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
 It’s might difficult to find. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me knowIf " if" starts an indirect question, you do not need to put a comma before it. if
, if
 you find somewhere fit my situation. 