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You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter , • Describe th esiituation. • Explain why you cannot continue at this time • Say what action you would like to take.

You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, • Describe th esiituation. • Explain why you cannot continue at this time • Say what action you would like to take. eqaK
Dear Dr. Nath, I am writing this letter to acknowledge you that owing to the myriad reasons, I am unable to continue my evening course of communication skills at University of Alberta. In the upcoming days, I will marry my childhood friend and I am the only person here to buy all such shopping for me and bride. Additionally, I have full time job and as I am youngest employees in my department I have to do overtime also. Therefore, I presume that I will not justify my role in this course. Actually, when I joined the course I found it significantlly attractive and lucid to learn but then nowadays I cannot cope up this study with my full time work and other personal responsibilities. The prime reason is that because of all above mentioned points, I think I will meet the deadlines of submission of an assignments which results into disqualification of my students status. It is humble request to you please guide me with plausible and attainable solutions in this condition. Also, Please grant me to discontinue from this course and do necessary actions to release my paid fees. I am anticipating your favourable support in this matter. Yours sincerely, Endrick Contractor.
Dear Dr.
Nath
,

I am writing this letter to acknowledge you that owing to the myriad reasons, I am unable to continue my evening course of communication
skills
at University of Alberta.

In the upcoming days, I will marry my childhood
friend and
I am the
only
person here to
buy
all such shopping for me and bride.
Additionally
, I have full time job and as I am
youngest
employees in my department I
have to
do overtime
also
.
Therefore
, I presume that I will not justify my role in this course.

Actually, when I
joined
the course I found it
significantlly
attractive and lucid to learn
but
then nowadays I cannot cope up this study with my full time work and other personal responsibilities. The prime reason is that
because
of all above mentioned points, I
think
I will
meet
the deadlines of submission of
an assignments
which results into disqualification of my students status.

It is humble request to you
please
guide me with plausible and attainable solutions in this condition.
Also
,
Please
grant me to discontinue from this course and do necessary actions to release my paid fees.

I am anticipating your
favourable
support in this matter.

Yours
sincerely
,

Endrick
Contractor.
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IELTS letter You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, • Describe th esiituation. • Explain why you cannot continue at this time • Say what action you would like to take.

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6.0
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