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You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home, you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter • explain what happened,to your watch • describe your watch • ask the manager to help you find it

You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home, you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter • explain what happened, to your watch • describe your watch • ask the manager to help you find it KDDR
Dear Sir or Madam, I had a 3 days of stay at your hotel, Holiday Inn in Ottawa, last week. During my stay I bought a wrist watch from the Fairview Park mall, but I just realized that I forgot to pick it up from the dresser in my allocated room. I hope that you would help me find my watch. While I was packing up my luggage, I completely forgot to check drawers of the dresser which was next to my bed, but I did check all drawers of the desk. The room number I stayed in was B-501. The watch that I am looking for is a smart wrist watch from Apple. The dial of the watch is circle and the band is of blue color. I hope you will try to find my watch by asking the hotel staff and if possible personally visiting the room which I stayed in. Looking forward to hearing back from you. Regards, Tom
Dear Sir or Madam,

I had a 3 days of stay at your hotel, Holiday Inn in Ottawa, last week. During my stay I
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from the Fairview Park mall,
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realized that I forgot to pick it up from the dresser in my allocated room. I hope that you would
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me find my
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watch
.

While I was packing up my luggage, I completely forgot to
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check
drawers of the dresser which was
next
to my bed,
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but
I did
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check
all drawers of the desk. The room number I stayed in was B-501.

The
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watch
that I am looking for is a smart wrist
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watch
from Apple.
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The
dial of the
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watch
is circle and the band is of blue color.

I hope you will try to find my
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watch
by asking the hotel staff and if possible
personally
visiting the room which I stayed in.

Looking forward to hearing back from you.

Regards,

Tom
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IELTS letter You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home, you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter • explain what happened, to your watch • describe your watch • ask the manager to help you find it

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8 paragraphs
161 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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