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You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home, you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter • explain what happened,to your watch • describe your watch • ask the manager to help you find it

You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home, you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter • explain what happened, to your watch • describe your watch • ask the manager to help you find it mjjA
Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing about a lost item. While I was staying at your hotel last week, I lost my wristwatch. I hope you can help me find it. When I arrived home after my stay in Honolulu, I realized that I didn't have my watch with me. I am sure I left it behind in my hotel room. I stayed in room 401, and I think I must have left the watch on the table by the bed. The watch is a lady's wristwatch with a chrome band. There is a yellow moon on the face with a bluish0black background. The brand of the watch is TIMEOUT. I would appreciate it if you would help me find my watch. Perhaps the staff found it when they were cleaning the room, or maybe someone turned it in to the lost and found office. Please call me if you find the watch, and I will send you a check to pay for the postage to mail it to me. Thank you very much for your help. Sincerely, Therese Lim
Dear Sir or Madam:

I am writing about a lost item. While I was staying at your hotel last week, I lost my wristwatch. I hope you can
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help
me find it.

When I arrived home after my stay in Honolulu, I realized that I didn't have my
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watch
with me. I am sure I
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left
it behind in my hotel room. I stayed in room 401, and I
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think
I
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have
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left
the
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on the table by the bed.

The
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watch
is a lady's wristwatch with a chrome band. There is a yellow moon on the face with a bluish0black background. The brand of the
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watch
is TIMEOUT.

I would appreciate it if you would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me find my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
watch
. Perhaps the staff found it when they were cleaning the room, or maybe someone turned it in to the lost and found office.
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Please
call me if you find the
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watch
, and I will
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send
you a
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check
to pay for the postage to mail it to me.

Thank you
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much for your
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help
.

Sincerely
, Therese
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IELTS letter You stayed at a hotel last week. After you got home, you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter • explain what happened, to your watch • describe your watch • ask the manager to help you find it

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7 paragraphs
180 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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