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Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with a friend. He/She has just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● thank him/her for the photos and for the holiday ● explain why you didn’t write earlier ● invite them to come and stay with you.

Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with a friend. He/She has just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● thank him/her for the photos and for the holiday ● explain why you didn’t write earlier ● invite them to come and stay with you. mjmA
Dear John, I hope this letter finds you well. I’m just writing to thank you for the holiday and for the photos you sent. Thanks so much for sending the photos. They arrived this morning in the post, and they reminded me what a great time I had during my stay with you last month. You really were a fantastic host, and I couldn’t have asked for a better guide to show me around. Sorry I didn’t write to you earlier, but I’ve been working flat out since the moment I arrived home. Do you remember I told you I had an assignment to finish? Well, the deadline was two weeks earlier than I thought it was and I almost missed it! Now that I’ve handed in all of my assignments, why don’t you come and stay? There’s a spare room here, so you don’t have to worry about putting anyone out. You’re welcome to stay as long as you like. Hope to see you soon,
Dear John,

I hope this letter finds you well. I’m
just
writing to thank you for the holiday and for the photos you
sent
.

Thanks
so
much for sending the photos. They arrived this morning in the post, and they reminded me what a great time I had during my stay with you last month. You
really
were a fantastic host, and I couldn’t have
asked for
a better guide to
show
me around.

Sorry I didn’t write to you earlier,
but
I’ve been working flat out since the moment I arrived home. Do you remember I
told
you I had an assignment to finish? Well, the deadline was two weeks earlier than I
thought
it was and I almost missed it!

Now
that I’ve handed in all of my assignments, why don’t you
come
and stay? There’s a spare room here,
so
you don’t
have to
worry about putting anyone out. You’re welcome to stay as long as you like.

Hope to
see
you
soon
,
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IELTS letter Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with a friend. He/She has just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● thank him/her for the photos and for the holiday ● explain why you didn’t write earlier ● invite them to come and stay with you.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
166 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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