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You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job 7kxY
Dear Milan, How's your trip to America? Hope all went good. I'm writing this to ask for your help regards of part-time work when I'll be there. As you know I'm planning to Canada since last 1 year and see now I got the chance. I took the admission in University of Windsor in the January intake 2021 in the course of Masters in Mechanical Engineering. The course duration is of 2 years providing 10 hours per week for study in college. The primary reason for job is that I need to handle my expenses there such as house rent and car loan as I planned to purchase a car. Moreover, I can save money for the next semester fees as I don't want to give pressure to my parents for further expenses. I'd be grateful if you could arrange the employment for me. As I'll be free after college hours I can do work there for any hours. I know the place where you work currently require a person who can handle the reception desk so could you please recommend my name to your boss? Or can you provide me any recruitment agency address and contact number so that I can contact them once I'll be there. Look forward for your reply. Regards, Urvish.
Dear Milan,

How's your trip to America? Hope all went
good
. I'm writing this to
ask for
your
help
regards of part-time work when I'll be there.

As you know I'm planning to Canada since last 1 year and
see
now
I
got
the chance. I took the admission in University of Windsor in the January intake 2021 in the course of Masters in Mechanical Engineering. The course duration is of 2 years providing 10 hours per week for study in college. The primary reason for job is that I need to handle my expenses there such as
house
rent and car loan as I planned to
purchase
a car.
Moreover
, I can save money for the
next
semester fees as I don't want to give pressure to my parents for
further
expenses.

I'd be grateful if you could arrange the employment for me. As I'll be free after college hours I can do work there for any hours. I know the place where you work
currently
require a person who can handle the reception desk
so
could you
please
recommend my name to your boss? Or can you provide me any recruitment agency address and contact number
so
that I can contact them once I'll be there.

Look forward for your reply.

Regards,

Urvish
.
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IELTS letter You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
215 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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