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Dear Friend, First, I would like to thank you for agreeing to take care of my pet.

Dear Friend, First, I would like to thank you for agreeing to take care of my pet. VDDm

Dear Friend, First, I would like to thank you for agreeing to take care of my pet. As explained, I will leave on the 15th of March 2021 and return on the 30th of March 2021. My pet eats four times a day. I have stocked enough food that would be available for four weeks. I have segregated the food by different time of the day so that it is easy for you while feeding. I have fixed an appointment every Wednesday, 11: 00 AM at PetSmart shop for my pet's weekly shower. Please change the sleeping mat every day and wash them every alternate and dry them in my backyard. The trash pickup is done once a week every Tuesday at 8: 00 AM so please empty the trash the previous day and place the bags in the respective bins kept separately for garbage, recycle and bio-degradable. Lastly, please water the plants and the lawn every alternate day. Thank you, Kamalakannan

Dear Friend,

First
, I would like to thank you for agreeing to take care of my pet.

As This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpreted
explained
, I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 on the 15th of March 2021 and return on the 30th of March 2021.

My pet eats four times a day. I have stocked This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 food that would be available for four weeks. I have segregated the food by This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 time of the day This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that it is easy for you while feeding. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
 an appointment every Wednesday, 11: 00 AM at Possible spelling mistake found.PetS mart
PetSmart
 shop for my pet's weekly shower.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 the sleeping mat every day and wash them every alternate and dry them in my backyard.

The trash pickup is done
 once a week every Tuesday at 8: 00 AM This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 empty the trash the previous day and place the bags in the respective bins This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
separately
 for garbage, recycle and bio-degradable.

Lastly
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 water the plants and the lawn every alternate day.

Thank you,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Kamalakannan