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Dear Friend, First, I would like to thank you for agreeing to take care of my pet.

Dear Friend, First, I would like to thank you for agreeing to take care of my pet. VDDm
Dear Friend, First, I would like to thank you for agreeing to take care of my pet. As explained, I will leave on the 15th of March 2021 and return on the 30th of March 2021. My pet eats four times a day. I have stocked enough food that would be available for four weeks. I have segregated the food by different time of the day so that it is easy for you while feeding. I have fixed an appointment every Wednesday, 11: 00 AM at PetSmart shop for my pet's weekly shower. Please change the sleeping mat every day and wash them every alternate and dry them in my backyard. The trash pickup is done once a week every Tuesday at 8: 00 AM so please empty the trash the previous day and place the bags in the respective bins kept separately for garbage, recycle and bio-degradable. Lastly, please water the plants and the lawn every alternate day. Thank you, Kamalakannan
Dear Friend,

First
, I would like to thank you for agreeing to take care of my pet.

As
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explained
, I will
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leave
on the 15th of March 2021 and return on the 30th of March 2021.

My pet eats four times a day. I have stocked
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enough
food that would be available for four weeks. I have segregated the food by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
time of the day
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so
that it is easy for you while feeding.
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I
have
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fixed
an appointment every Wednesday, 11: 00 AM at
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PetSmart
shop for my pet's weekly shower.

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Please
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change
the sleeping mat every day and wash them every alternate and dry them in my backyard.

The trash pickup
is done
once a week every Tuesday at 8: 00 AM
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so
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please
empty the trash the previous day and place the bags in the respective bins
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kept
separately
for garbage, recycle and bio-degradable.

Lastly
,
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please
water the plants and the lawn every alternate day.

Thank you,

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Kamalakannan
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IELTS letter Dear Friend, First, I would like to thank you for agreeing to take care of my pet.

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6.0
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