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You stayed at a friend’s house while he/she was away and experienced a problem with a kitchen appliance. Write a letter to your friend and include the following: • How you liked staying at his/her house • What was the problem with the kitchen appliance • Explain what you did to solve the problem.

You stayed at a friend’s house while he/she was away and experienced a problem with a kitchen appliance. Write a letter to your friend and include the following: • How you liked staying at his/her house • What was the problem with the kitchen appliance • Explain what you did to solve the problem. 5LPeP
Dear Ram, I hope you are doing well in your life. I would like to express my gratitude for my stay at your house. Your house caters all the basic amenities, and it is quite spacious. I really enjoyed my stay at your home. I would like to tell you that few day before I was late from my work, and I forgot to order my dinner. So I decided to cook rice in the microwave, but unfortunately its power button did not work. Then I called the customer care, but he gave evade answers. I was tired on that day, and therefore I did not repair it. Next day I quest on internet about the problem, and found that a small plug was exploited. Then I visited on the nearby store and brought the same plug and replaced it. Now it is working fine. Hoping to see you soon Best regards,
Dear Ram,

I hope you are doing well in your life. I would like to express my gratitude for my stay at your
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. Your
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house
caters all the basic amenities, and it is quite spacious. I
really
enjoyed my stay at your home.

I would like to
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tell
you that
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before
I was late from my work, and I forgot to order my dinner.
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So
I decided to cook rice in the microwave,
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but
unfortunately its power button did not work. Then I called the customer care,
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but
he gave evade answers. I
was tired
on that day, and
therefore
I did not repair it.

Next
day I quest on internet about the problem, and found that a
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small
plug
was exploited
. Then I visited on the nearby store and brought the same plug and replaced it.
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Now
it is working fine.

Hoping to
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see
you
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soon


Best regards,
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IELTS letter You stayed at a friend’s house while he/she was away and experienced a problem with a kitchen appliance. Write a letter to your friend and include the following: • How you liked staying at his/her house • What was the problem with the kitchen appliance • Explain what you did to solve the problem.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
152 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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