Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

introduce yourself in class

introduce yourself in class Oy0LM
Hello! I would like to introduce myself to you. My name is Lan Huong or another name is Cindy. I am a sophomore in Ho Chi Minh university of education and my major is English linguistic. I have lived in Vung Tau city for ages before I opt for resettlement with my family in HCM city. I have modern lifestyle and I am a shopaholic. Some besties often call me as “fashionista” because I am a kind of person who takes a lot of pride in my appearance and I always keep myself well-dressed whenever I go out. Furthermore, I prefer reading especially “rich dad poor dad” by virtue of the meaningful underlying messages and I maintain reading habit on a weekly basis. In terms of study, I like studying method lean toward doing some interesting activities in class or making lively discussions. Moreover, gaining precious knowledge is the key point when I attend in your class and I aspire to high score in this subject. Perhaps, my English’s ability is not as good as others so I hope you may improve my English skills in the process of studying this subject.
Hello! I would like to introduce myself to you. My name is
Lan
Huong
or another name is Cindy. I am a sophomore in Ho Chi Minh university of education and my major is English linguistic. I have
lived
in
Vung
Tau city for ages
before
I opt for resettlement with my family in
HCM
city.
I
have modern lifestyle and I am a shopaholic.
Some
besties
often
call me as “fashionista”
because
I am a kind of person who takes
a lot of
pride in my appearance and I always
keep
myself well-dressed whenever I go out.
Furthermore
, I prefer reading
especially
“rich dad poor dad” by virtue of the meaningful underlying messages and I maintain reading habit on a weekly basis.

In terms of study, I like studying method lean toward doing
some
interesting activities in
class
or making lively discussions.
Moreover
, gaining precious knowledge is the key point when I attend in your
class
and I aspire to high score in this subject. Perhaps, my English’s ability is not as
good
as others
so
I hope you may
improve
my English
skills
in the process of studying this subject.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter introduce yourself in class

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
192 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts