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Student were asked to write a letter to a friend to tell him/her about the new flat move. They need to say that why they move, what is the new flat look like and is inviting friend to visit.

Student were asked to write a letter to a friend to tell him/her about the new flat move. They need to say that why they move, what is the new flat look like and is inviting friend to visit. ebLmV

Dear Jones, I'd love to share this news to you that we have recently relocated to a new flat. We had to change the previous one due to repair and mantinance issues with the landlord. Luckily, we were able to found this recently renovated flat in no time and less effort. This place has met our expectations of what we want. It has great view of sea, as it is located near the coast. The best thing is it is closed to my work. Because of recent renovation, this two bedroom flat is similar to new one and rent is affordable to. It'll be a great pleasure for me, if you'll visit us and have a look at this suplinded place. I'll organise a friend meet up party within next few days, in which you are invited. I'd like to share these happy moments with my friends. I can't wait to see you. Your Friend, David

Dear Jones,

I'd This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to share this news to you that we have recently relocated to a new flat. We had to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 the previous one due to repair and Possible spelling mistake found.maintenance
mantinance
 issues with the landlord. Luckily, we were able to found this recently renovated flat in no time and less effort.

This place has met our expectations of what we want. It has great view of sea, as it is located
 near the coast. The best thing is it is closed
 to my work. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 of recent renovation, this It appears that a hyphen is missing.two-bedroom
two bedroom
 flat is similar to new one and rent is affordable to.

It'll be a great pleasure for me, if you'll visit us and have a look at this Possible spelling mistake found.splinedsplinteduplinked
suplinded
 place. I'll Possible spelling mistake. 'organise' is British English.organize
organise
 a friend This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 up party within next
 few days, in which you are invited
. I'd like to share these happy moments with my friends.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 can't wait to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you.

Your Friend,

David