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Student were asked to write a letter to a friend to tell him/her about the new flat move. They need to say that why they move, what is the new flat look like and is inviting friend to visit.

Student were asked to write a letter to a friend to tell him/her about the new flat move. They need to say that why they move, what is the new flat look like and is inviting friend to visit. ebLmV
Dear Jones, I'd love to share this news to you that we have recently relocated to a new flat. We had to change the previous one due to repair and mantinance issues with the landlord. Luckily, we were able to found this recently renovated flat in no time and less effort. This place has met our expectations of what we want. It has great view of sea, as it is located near the coast. The best thing is it is closed to my work. Because of recent renovation, this two bedroom flat is similar to new one and rent is affordable to. It'll be a great pleasure for me, if you'll visit us and have a look at this suplinded place. I'll organise a friend meet up party within next few days, in which you are invited. I'd like to share these happy moments with my friends. I can't wait to see you. Your Friend, David
Dear Jones,

I'd
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to share this news to you that we have recently relocated to a new flat. We had to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the previous one due to repair and
Possible spelling mistake found.
mantinance
issues with the landlord. Luckily, we were able to found this recently renovated flat in no time and less effort.

This place has met our expectations of what we want. It has great view of sea, as it
is located
near the coast. The best thing is it
is closed
to my work.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
of recent renovation, this
It appears that a hyphen is missing.
two bedroom
flat is similar to new one and rent is affordable to.

It'll be a great pleasure for me, if you'll visit us and have a look at this
Possible spelling mistake found.
suplinded
place. I'll
Possible spelling mistake. 'organise' is British English.
organise
a friend
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
up party within
next
few days, in which you
are invited
. I'd like to share these happy moments with my friends.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
can't wait to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you.

Your Friend,

David
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IELTS letter Student were asked to write a letter to a friend to tell him/her about the new flat move. They need to say that why they move, what is the new flat look like and is inviting friend to visit.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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