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You stayed at a friend’s house last weekend and lost your watch. Write a letter to your friend.

You stayed at a friend’s house last weekend and lost your watch. Write a letter to your friend. mLEaq
Dear Pratik, I hope you doing well. Last week we had good time with you and I really enjoyed. When I returned to my house found that I lost my watch at your place. So I am writing to you letter inform you about this situation. Since, the time when I realized that there was nothing on my wrist feel like I lost my hand. On the birthday occasion, this was gifted from my sister as surprise present. Because from very long time ago I was looking for it and then wish come true. Another reason to be special was I really like apple watches. and It costs more than we never thought. Apple watches offer more features and cool looks than any other digital watch. We can change themes for screen display, control every single functionality via watch. I want you to search for my watch at your place, specifically in the tv lounge area. And if you find it, just make a call and I will collect it from you while returning home from office. Yours truly, Ganesh
Dear
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Pratik
,

I hope
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you doing
well. Last week we had
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good
time with you and I
really
enjoyed.
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I returned to my
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house
found that I lost my
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watch
at your place.
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So
I am writing to you letter inform you about this situation.

Since, the time when I realized that there was nothing on my wrist feel like I lost my hand. On the birthday occasion, this
was gifted
from my sister as surprise present.
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Because
from
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very
long time ago I was looking for it and then wish
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come
true. Another reason to be special was I
really
like apple
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watches
.
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and
It costs more than we never
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thought
. Apple
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watches
offer more features and cool looks than any other digital
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watch
. We can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
themes for screen display, control every single functionality via
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
.

I want you to search for my
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watch
at your place,
specifically
in the
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tv
lounge area. And if you find it,
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just
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make
a call and I will collect it from you while returning home from office.

Yours
truly
,

Ganesh
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IELTS letter You stayed at a friend’s house last weekend and lost your watch. Write a letter to your friend.

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6 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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