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I am not being able to go to my friend's birthday party therefore I apologize for that

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Good morning. Dear my best friend Nastya, I am writing to apologise for not being able to go to your birthday party which held on Monday. I hope you had a best day. Firstly, thank you for inviting me to your birthday. I also saw the invitation given to me. However, I could not go and I apologize for that to you and your family. I wanted you to know that I had planned to go to this party a few days ago. But I went to the doctor that day because I had a hard headache. Then the doctor told me I needed to rest and go anywhere if possible. Therefore, I could not. I apologize again. I hope you were not angry with me for I could not go to the party. I really wanted to go. I promise to definitely go next time. In order to correct my guilt, I invite you to the restaurant tonight. I hope you will come. Please answer me as soon as you read my letter. Sincerely, Diana.
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morning. Dear my best friend
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Nastya
, I am writing to
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apologise
for not being able to go to your birthday party which held on Monday. I hope you had
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a
best day.
Firstly
, thank you for inviting me to your birthday. I
also
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saw
the invitation
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given
to me.
However
, I could not go and I
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apologize
for that to you and your family. I wanted you to know that I had planned to go to this party a few days ago.
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But
I went to the doctor that day
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because
I had a
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hard
headache. Then the doctor
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told
me I needed to rest and go anywhere if possible.
Therefore
, I could not. I
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apologize
again. I hope you were not angry with me for I could not go to the party.
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I
really
wanted to go.
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I
promise to definitely go
next
time. In order to correct my guilt, I invite you to the restaurant tonight. I hope you will
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come
.
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Please
answer me as
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soon
as you read my letter.
Sincerely
, Diana.

IELTS letter I am not being able to go to my friend's birthday party therefore I apologize for that

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
176 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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