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Unsatisfied product. Write a letter to company about the product you recently purchased

Unsatisfied product. Write a letter to company about the product you recently purchased 1V0QG
Dear Sir or Madam, I recently purchased an iPhone Xr from your company’s website. I was excited to use the mobile phone when it arrived but disappointed when I opened the package and found that the phone screen was damaged. Therefore, I am writing this letter to ask for replacement. I purchased a red color iPhone Xr from your website “AppleIn. com” on date 22nd August. My order number is “MSAMSA” and I am also attaching the invoice with this letter for reference. As soon as I opened the delivery package, I identified that the phone screen had a big crack. I believe this might have happened during transit, or maybe it was a manufacturing defect. Also, it had scratches all over the body, making it seem like a used device. For resolution, I request you to provide a replacement for my purchased device as I do not want a used product with broken screen. I would like to hear from you within a week on this matter. Yours Faithfully, Droan
Dear Sir or Madam,

I recently
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purchased
an iPhone
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Xr
from your
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company
’s website. I
was excited
to
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use
the mobile phone when it arrived
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but
disappointed when I opened the package and found that the phone screen
was damaged
.
Therefore
, I am writing this letter to
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ask for
replacement.

I
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purchased
a red color iPhone
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Xr
from your website “
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AppleIn
.
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com
” on date 22nd August. My order number is “
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MSAMSA
” and I am
also
attaching the invoice with this letter for reference.

As
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soon
as I opened the delivery package, I identified that the phone screen had a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
crack. I believe this might have happened during transit, or maybe it was a manufacturing defect.
Also
, it had scratches all over the body, making it seem like a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
device.

For resolution, I request you to provide a replacement for my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
device as I do not want a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
product with broken screen.

I would like to hear from you within a week on this matter.

Yours
Faithfully
,

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Droan
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IELTS letter Unsatisfied product. Write a letter to company about the product you recently purchased

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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