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a letter to tell about a surprise party

a letter to tell about a surprise party APGWM
Dear Sue, I am writing you to describe about a surprise party that my coworkers suddenly celebrated for me last week as a result of my promotion. I work with some fantastic colleagues at the office. The appear to be my family whre I am. They had a small party after I received The University Certificate last month. When I opened the door, balloon flew to the ceiling. On the table, there were many things: a cake, candy, soda, fruit, … My group was celebrating while a large box was delivered. Our manager tole to me that I needed to open it. I felt excited at that time. This was a cake machine – I have wanted forr a long time. I was extremly happy and expessed mu gratitude to them because of the present. It was always a good memory for me. I had a great time at this party and never forget it. I hope all of our colleagues can get many achivements in the future. Your faithfully, Van.
Dear Sue,

I am writing you to
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describe
about a surprise party that my coworkers
suddenly
celebrated for me last week
as a result
of my promotion. I work with
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some
fantastic colleagues at the office.
After 'The', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'appear' is correct. If 'appear' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
The appear
to be my family
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whre
I am.

They had a
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small
party after I received The University Certificate last month. When I opened the door, balloon flew to the ceiling. On the table, there were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
things: a cake, candy, soda, fruit, … My group was celebrating while a large box
was delivered
. Our manager tole to me that I needed to open it. I felt excited at that time. This was a cake machine
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
–
I have wanted
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forr
a long time. I was
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extremly
happy and
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expessed
mu gratitude to them
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because
of the present. It was always a
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good
memory for me.

I had a great time at this party and never forget it. I hope all of our colleagues can
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get
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many
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achivements
in the future.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
faithfully
,

Van.
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IELTS letter a letter to tell about a surprise party

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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