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•Tell Your Freind about the job and what sort of work it involves •say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her •explain how to apply for the job.

•Tell Your Freind about the job and what sort of work it involves •say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her •explain how to apply for the job. mL0LA
Dear RakinFirst of all accept my best wishes. How are you? I am fine. I would prefer to say about the job. I think this job will be suitable and perfect for you. i know you are well experienced about some computer skilss, and this job i totally computer based. You will do everything by compute. You are expert in computer and various courses and this work based on some of courses which you trained thats why i think this job suitable for you. You should aware of how to apply for this job. First you have to make a C. V. Secondly you have to manage your courses certificates. Finally This company has Their own website to submissio. You Will Submit here and waiting for the confirmation thats it.
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of all accept my best wishes. How are you? I am fine. I would prefer to say about the
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will be suitable and perfect for you.

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know you are well experienced about
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computer
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i
totally
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some of courses
which you trained
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why
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should aware
of how to apply for this
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you
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manage your courses certificates.
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. You Will Submit here and waiting for the confirmation
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IELTS letter •Tell Your Freind about the job and what sort of work it involves •say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her •explain how to apply for the job.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
130 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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