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your daughters school principal wishes to improve the learning experience of the students in the class write a letter to her

your daughters school principal wishes to improve the learning experience of the students in the class write a letter to her QwWPw

I am writing to you with regard to your request to improve learning experience of students in the chemistry class and laboratory. first of all my daughter has lack of attention in lab classes due to the number of students in each section and it seems that sections are a bit crowded. furthermore, some lab equipments are out of order and this causes some issues both for students and teachers. I suggest that the number of sections should be increased and new equipments be purchased in order to increase learning efficacy. secondly there is insufficient air conditioner in chemistry lab. Although you had installed enough heater last winter, it seems that you should prepare the lab for summer too as my daughter has complained about hot air in this spring. I hope that you take these suggestions into consideration and i would be happy to help you solve these issues.

I am writing to you with regard to your request to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 learning experience of students in the chemistry This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 and laboratory. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".first
first of all
 my daughter has lack of attention in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworkshop
lab
 classes due to the number of students in each section and it seems that sections are a bit crowded. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFurthermore
furthermore
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworkshop
lab
 equipments are out of order and this causes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 issues both for students and teachers. I suggest that the number of sections should be increased
 and new equipments be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 in order to increase learning efficacy. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSecondly
secondly
 there is insufficient air conditioner in chemistry You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworkshop
lab
. Although you had installed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 heater last winter, it seems that you should prepare the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworkshop
lab
 for summer too as my daughter has complained about hot air in this spring. I hope that you take these suggestions into consideration and Did you mean "I"?I
i
 would be happy to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you solve these issues. 