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You stayed a holiday resort recomended by your travel agent. However, you did not enjoy your stay due to a number of difficulties write a letter describing them and asking for action to be taken.

You stayed a holiday resort recomended by your travel agent. However, you did not enjoy your stay due to a number of difficulties write a letter describing them and asking for action to be taken. 7aqX2

Dear Sir/Madam I want to express my strong dissatifiction with resort recomended by by your travel agent. At first time It is semmed to conforts of hotel are normal. However, I liked the hotel in the morning but I was going to have bath and swiched on hot water. Unfortunately, It it was switched off. l was very nervous. I asked staffs of the hotel to switched on it in polite way. But, they refused as well as they were too impolite. In spite of after that situation I was going to use the internet for work. Although, the internet's speed was very slow and connection was very poor, from that I was absalutely angry. Therefore, I was not able to do my work in time and My boss remarked me. These matters made me to write complain about difficulties and unconforts in the hotel. I hope that I will not be forced to take further action. Yours faithfully Sara Johnson

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dissatifiction
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recomended
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 your travel agent. At first
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 are normal. However
, I liked the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
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but
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It it
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very
 nervous. I asked staffs of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 to switched on it in polite way. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
, they refused as well
 as they were too impolite. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:notwithstanding
In spite of
 after that situation I was going to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the internet for work. Although, the internet's speed was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 slow and connection was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 poor, from that I was Possible spelling mistake found.absolutely
absalutely
 angry. Therefore
, I was not able to do my work in time and My boss remarked me. These matters made me to write complain about difficulties and Possible spelling mistake found.comfortsconformsconsortscontortsunconformity
unconforts
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
. I hope that I will not be forced
 to take further
 action. Yours faithfully
 Sara Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphJohnson.Johnson!Johnson?Johnson:Johnson,Johnson;
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