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To invite friends annual party

To invite friends annual party aqOnG
Dear Nancy I am writing to invite you for the annual party. The part be hold on 21th of march on monday at 10: 00. Th annual celebrate at Sanat Saroyi. At the event be dancing, singing and shows by our colleagues. We invite our all old friends and relatives. If you come party please call this number 90 780 16 06 before on 20th of march. I gave you some directions to find easily. The place situated near Osiyo market. I will look forward to you. Your sincere Zilola
Dear Nancy I am writing to invite you for the annual party. The part be hold on
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21th
of march on
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monday
at 10: 00.
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Th
annual celebrate at
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Sanat
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Saroyi
. At the
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event
be dancing, singing and
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shows
by our colleagues. We invite our all
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old
friends and relatives. If you
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come
party
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please
call this number 90 780 16 06
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before
on 20th of march. I gave you
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some
directions to find
easily
. The place situated near
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Osiyo
market. I will look forward to you. Your sincere
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Zilola
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IELTS letter To invite friends annual party

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
89 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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