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You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college

You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college VrqAA
Dear education management of Adiban University I would respond your advertisement which has shown in Damavand St near Razi high school that says about your necessity in network and security teachers for evening period. Although you have demanded professional in other computer fields, but I prefer to do activity in computer security. Computer network, threat hunting, securing software and artificial intelligence in cyber defense have lectured in Technical institute circa 3 years ago to now by me. These majors should teach pupils by expert in Information Technology. I have huge abilities in training mention courses. I have been doing securing network and website for ten years. In other words, I have been a knack in cybersecurity when I was a teenager. Also, I can tutor fundamental sciences each of courses until if the students had not exactly learned, they should have completely picked them up. Yours Faithfully Mohamad Chitsaz
Dear education management of
Adiban
University

I would respond your advertisement which has shown in
Damavand
St near
Razi
high school that says about your necessity in network and security teachers for evening period. Although you have demanded professional in other computer fields,
but
I prefer to do activity in computer security.

Computer network, threat hunting, securing software and artificial intelligence in cyber defense have lectured in Technical institute circa 3 years ago to
now
by me. These majors should teach pupils by expert in Information Technology. I have huge abilities in training mention courses.

I have been doing securing network and website for ten years.
In other words
, I have been a knack in cybersecurity when I was a
teenager
.
Also
, I can tutor fundamental sciences each of courses until if the students had not exactly learned, they should have completely picked them up.

Yours
Faithfully


Mohamad
Chitsaz
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college

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  American English
5 paragraphs
148 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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