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Write a letter to your parents describing your holiday so far

Write a letter to your parents describing your holiday so far JLAG6
Dear Jenny, How are you? I hope you are well. I am having a great time too. I want to tell you about my trip to Turkey. First I went to the famous Black Sea coast of Turkey. The beach is amazing and the people are crowded. We drank Turkish tea at a small buffet on the beach and watched the sea. The next day I went to the famous Ottoman Topkapi Palace. The palace is now a museum and we have turned its rooms, Its courtyard. I also visited many attractions and well-known markets of Turkey. As soon as I get back, I'll phone you and tell you all about it. See you soon Love, Lusy
Dear Jenny, How are you? I hope you are well. I am having a great time too.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
want to
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tell
you about my trip to Turkey.
First
I went to the
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famous
Black Sea coast of Turkey. The beach is amazing and the
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people
are crowded
. We drank Turkish tea at a
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small
buffet on the beach and
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watched
the sea. The
next
day I went to the
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famous
Ottoman
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Topkapi
Palace. The palace is
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now
a
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museum and
we have turned its rooms, Its courtyard. I
also
visited
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many
attractions and well-known markets of Turkey. As
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soon
as I
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get
back, I'll phone you and
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tell
you all about it.
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See
you
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soon
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Love
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Lusy

IELTS letter Write a letter to your parents describing your holiday so far

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
116 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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