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Write a letter to your parents describing your holiday so far

Write a letter to your parents describing your holiday so far JLAG6

Dear Jenny, How are you? I hope you are well. I am having a great time too. I want to tell you about my trip to Turkey. First I went to the famous Black Sea coast of Turkey. The beach is amazing and the people are crowded. We drank Turkish tea at a small buffet on the beach and watched the sea. The next day I went to the famous Ottoman Topkapi Palace. The palace is now a museum and we have turned its rooms, Its courtyard. I also visited many attractions and well-known markets of Turkey. As soon as I get back, I'll phone you and tell you all about it. See you soon Love, Lusy

Dear Jenny, How are you? I hope you are well. I am having a great time too. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you about my trip to Turkey. First
 I went to the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 Black Sea coast of Turkey. The beach is amazing and the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
are crowded
. We drank Turkish tea at a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 buffet on the beach and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
watched
 the sea. The next
 day I went to the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 Ottoman Possible spelling mistake found.Okapi
Topkapi
 Palace. The palace is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 a Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).museum, and
museum and
 we have turned its rooms, Its courtyard. I also
 visited This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 attractions and well-known markets of Turkey. As This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 back, I'll phone you and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you all about it. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
See
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love
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Lusy