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You and your family had dinner ina restaurant a few nights ago. The service at the restaurant was terrible and the food was bad. The food was also overpiced. Write to the manager to the restaurant.

You and your family had dinner ina restaurant a few nights ago. The service at the restaurant was terrible and the food was bad. The food was also overpiced. Write to the manager to the restaurant. W539k
Dear Sir, My family and I had dinner in your restaurant on Sunday 11 June. I am writing to complain about the food and service. The first problem was that, although we had booked a table near the window. We were squashed asmall table at the corner of the restaurant. It was very noisy and stuffied. Secondly, the service is very bad and the waitress are few. We had to 10 minutes to order. On the top of that, they brought our food in exchange. The waitres were rude and service was slow. Finally even though the reputation of your restaurant is good but the food was mediocre. The price was expensive. Since we had not enjoy this meal so we ask you to refund cost of our meal. I hope to resive youreply shortly. Yours faithfully, Ann
Dear Sir, My family and I had dinner in your restaurant on Sunday 11 June. I am writing to complain about the food and service. The
first
problem was that, although we had booked a table near the window. We
were squashed
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asmall
table at the corner of the restaurant. It was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
noisy and
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stuffied
.
Secondly
, the service is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
and the waitress are few. We had to 10 minutes to order. On the top of that, they brought our food in exchange. The
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waitres
were rude and service was slow.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Finally
even though
the reputation of your restaurant is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
the food was mediocre. The price was expensive. Since we had not
Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "enjoyed".
enjoy
this meal
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so
we ask you to refund cost of our meal. I hope to
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resive
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youreply
shortly. Yours
faithfully
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Ann

IELTS letter You and your family had dinner ina restaurant a few nights ago. The service at the restaurant was terrible and the food was bad. The food was also overpiced. Write to the manager to the restaurant.

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